All Comments on 'The Perfect Pair Pt. 11'

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thatotherguy008thatotherguy008almost 4 years ago
Pony play is the best!

I loved this chapter the most! Pony play is the best. I hope there is more of that coming. Please say there is more pony play! Great story overall. Love every chapter.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 4 years ago
Love Pony Play!

Genius idea for Halloween! Also love that Elf Carrie got close enough to see the difference between their belts!!! Scary twist!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful but slowing

Wonderful story as always, but I’m champing at the bit (hah) to see Denise move on in her journey.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great chapter

A full five from me. I do like the way Kelly gradually gets more control. Maybe she'll also be having Denise and Brooks' keys before long............

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Time for Denise to take the plunge and become a full time woman

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