All Comments on 'The Perfect Wife Ch. 01'

But with this guy we all know where it's going.

This is a good part 1...Let's see where the writer will take this...3* for now

Is that like tea bagging?

LOL, yes, I was going to comment on writers who don't know the difference between "balling" and "bawling"!

But please work on your delivery skills and proof reading

No rating yet.

"A mother and daughter were on the big-screen TV balling their eyes out."

Are they fucking their eyes out (balling) or are they crying their eyes out (bawling)... makes a fucking huge difference.

Thanks to those of you who pointed out my spelling error of "bawling." As an editor of more than 30 years, I've learned that it's difficult to edit your own work, no matter how many times you read it. I've updated the story to fix the error along with several others I found when I read through it yet again. It will take a couple of days for Literotica to repost it. Maybe someday I'll write the perfect story to go along with my perfect wife.

No cheating, no lying, and especially no cuckold. Something new for this site.

Much more fun that way.

Yes it is enjoyable to see a "loving story" on this site!

It was a refreshing chance from the

standard cheating spouse template

found in LW. A loving wife, indeed.

Hmm...what a radical L/W notion--a truly loving husband and wife, in a well-written, fun story. Who'da thunk?