All Comments on 'The Phoenix and the Ice Queen Pt. 03'

You crafty so and so! You have set us up very nicely...

Cracking story! Plot, characters, dialogue, context - in short, everything. Very well done and much appreciated.

Great wrap-up with a teaser for more in the future - 5*

The story was great, until chapter 4, when the very strong-willed Mel brought in a proxy for birthday sex. I hated this part and the follow-on at the end. What happened to "there's no one else for me but you"? Took away a star for this planned infidelity.

A very enjoyable read. I especially liked that there was an actual story with some erotica. Pity we don't read more postings on this site like this. Thank you for sharing it with us.

stopped at 3rd part page 2 the thing with katy was stupid and senseless

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Excellente Series!

11/10!!!!!