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by Jouleian

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Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

Mmmm...I like where this is headed....lots of opportunity to expand the characters!

Some typos and grammar to work on as you bring the narrative forward.

“Handsome” Leslie is intriguing.....

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I apparently think about sex enough to have to write about it all the time. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Cheers! -JR

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