by RichMannly
LUBE....The story was fine up until the fucking part because asses need lube and gently opening expecially if they've never been entered before another thing...a slight discomfort or pain can be felt as we'll with anal sex so think about that and hopefully edit it into your story...
The story was very good in the beginning, but once they started watching porn the story just raced to finish....a bit more detail on the fucking would've been great :)