All Comments on 'The Plant'

by Mamas_Gurl

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Congrats on your first story. I suggest not to rush your story, more buildup and details. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very mid. Obviously you don't have a cervix. That would be a terribly traumatic experience for any woman to have and no amount of plant juice is going to change that.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

this was awesome. you should write more and more!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nice. A very entertaining story I glad it was not a drawn out story several sections long like too many of the stories have been lately. Stories two to four pages are good. 8 or more not so

StatiusStatius5 months ago

Nice! Keep it up. And my advice? Write your stories your way. Length of story should be determined by what your writing, not what someone tells you. My two longest stories are my most popular. Good luck to you!

ccitydudeccitydude4 months ago

Gurl, a very nice first effort. This isn't a love story, it's a plant rape. You got the plant, you brought it home and the fucking began. No need for any more setup. Excellent. I'd like to have read a bit more of your experience after the three hole insertion, but it's your story, so pace it how you will. I found it all very sexy. Keep writing. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is great, please continue it! <3

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