All Comments on 'The Pleasures of Submission Ch. 03'

I like her internal struggle, wanting to accept who she is yet fighting it.

Loving the story, and I have had several black girls on Fetlife approach me in exactly the same manner, with the same desires, there must be something to the desires...

As for your grammar, I keep coming back to the movie "The Secretary" and how he had her bent over the desk, spanking her for her grammatical errors, as I would love to you!

I agree about how well you have portrayed her struggles... and about how arousing this is for at least some Black women, myself included. But, yes, again, attention to editing would make the story even better, as good as it is in other respects.