All Comments on 'The Ponytail Express Ch. 12'

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BruceWo over 2 years ago

Loved it. Getting better by the episode.

TSreader over 2 years ago

Another great addition to this story! For me the fight scene was well done. Not to drawn out and on point. I wondered what was the lawyer doing during the fight; why didn't she run? But, then they went to the room. The chapter is a bit short, I felt the lawyers interrogation should have continued here, and not wait for the next chapter... It's all good, I'm always waiting to read more of this story. Thank you!

Anonymousover 2 years ago

I have been following this series since its inception. I have enjoyed it immensely. I always reread the previous chapter prior to reading your new one. It refreshes the plot for me and makes for a more enjoyable read. Keep it going.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

when are you going to write some more. really enjoy your story

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