All Comments on 'The Portrait Ch. 04'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 2 years ago

Beyond the fringe. Over the edge. Depraved - delightfully so! Five stars! When goes George get to play with her big tits and to fuck Alice?

Peter_ClevelandPeter_Clevelandabout 2 years ago

The original "Portrait" story is starting to look pretty tame by comparison with Jaydean409's sequels. At the end of Chapter 3 I had the feeling that Alice would reappear in a later chapter or two. But her transformation here into a full-fledged dominatrix really caught me by surprise. This is great fun, and very interesting, and sexy as well. Jaydean is a master of depravity and perversity, and a very inventive writer, too. I won't even try to guess what happens next. I like this series a lot.

NeoGatekeeperNeoGatekeeper5 months ago

Loved this one. I hope you someday continue the chapters. Group scenes are difficult. I have been stuck writing one for months now. Gave this 5 stars. I don't understand why some people vote this type of stories down. Good luck.

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I'm a dirty old man, love reading stories of slavery, humiliation, forced bi-sex, cuckoldry and other perversions.

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