by Not2Pervy
If he was even remotely close to that good in bed, there would have been no wife leaving him, or pining for her after she was gone. Ludicrous plot.
The author well presented a credible story. Sex is only a small, though very important, part of life. The MC was a careful thoughtful man who understood that a woman needs to feel loved every minute of every day. Yes he got satisfaction, but she gave it freely because he unselfishly worked to give her the best possible experience, even though realising her age, he had no hope of gaining the emotional partner he needed. Experiencing his true love won her.
As for the wife, there are people no matter how great the sex are still always looking for something ever better, for a greater and greater sexual high. It was not the purpose of the author to explain the problems of the wife.
10k words is a very good length.
One of the reasons I will not post stories on Literotica is they would be wasted on the multiplicity of basically immature people have no concept of what keeps people together. Even worse they think they know it all and refuse to learn and grow.
"If he was even remotely close to that good in bed, there would have been no wife leaving him, or pining for her after she was gone. Ludicrous plot."
I am thankful there are some very good authors, like this one, that provide us with quality entertainment for free.
We should recognise what they teach ad encourage them. Probably nothing makes them happier that their readers "get it!"
funny just yesterday I told my girlfriend after she told me I was stuck with her ,like it sure seemed like glue a super glue in fact ( had not read your story yet),loved it and had to give 5 stars
Nice premise.
Sex really rushed. To mechanical. Too automatic.
Needed much more DETAILED foreplay/preliminaries.
Needed dialog during all that.
Three stars.
Excellent story, really enjoyed reading it,, the story line had an interesting twist and was amazing the way it unfolded, really loved it.