All Comments on 'The Power of Suggestion Ch. 01'

Good start... look forward to more

A very good opener. This could be an amazing story, Please do not let it get too dark. 5 stars.

Waiting for the next chapter(s)👍🙂

A great start.

A great start. Keep the boy level headed but adventurous.

Good Start... Nice to see someone who can spell

A good start, don’t rush to quick, slow experimentation between them would be a fun avenue.

This is a nice start. I look forward to future chapters.

This story beginning is silly, cute, hot and a fun read. Now I just have to remember to stay calm and wait for the next…..stay calm and wait for the next chapter.

Good start, hopefully the next chapters are a bit longer . Looking forward reading more.

We’ll written. Enjoyed the start. What’s next?

"People just tended to gravitate away from him. It had been like this ever since he could remember, with even his own family forgetting about him from time to time. As a result of this, Thomas generally kept to himself."

Well, I think Thomas got that the wrong way around.

I like your story, you seem to have a lot of subtlety!

Your characters could be me and a man I know!