All Comments on 'The Price of Forgiveness'

A story about a self righteous cry baby. You tore my heart out as so I can be cruel and vicious. Rhonda better watch out for this prick.

Writer hasnt written for years, so not much point in commenting. Regardless this was spoiled for me by death and childish obsession with size.

He deserved kids like that. What an ass. So they took their mothers side. She was wrong and so were they. Don't cut off your kids. Sorry

@grassisgreener. YOU DO CUT OFF KIDS LIKE THAT. THEY WERE ADULTS AND CHOSE EVIL. Immoral choices deserve bad consequences . IRL, you may or may not eventually forgive them, but there is nothing wrong with not forgiving. Sentimentality is most often poisonous and oftenresults in a lack of justice.

Four stars for an unhappy story with characters it's hard to like. The tale could have gone in many directions, but this is the one the writer chose. Again, four stars for a well written tale that it is hard to like.

JPB NOT BOB

The conversation with Ann has a nice comedy vibe to it, maybe partly because of her mostly deadpan deliveries, and the inconsistencies - she was screwing around because the sex was too good, or the guy didn't know how to use his dick, which one is it? Fun story, if only for the pigheadedness.

I think that the only way to fully understand this tale would be to live it. Thanks Slirpuff

somewhere east of Omaha