All Comments on 'The Prisoner Ch. 07'

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gaesmogaesmoabout 14 years ago
Finally

Finally, My main problem with your stories has been the shitty way you treated the husbands after years of marriage. I can understand the hot sex and the interracial thing, but to just "crap" on someone you supposedly loved without a second thought or without ANY sign of remorse just really made me angry with your two lead characters. So.....I don't know where you take us from here, but at least if they divorce now they both have some closure and know that they do at some level love each other. I hope they don't divorce, but....thats up to you, I hate wimp husbands so some accomadation would have to be made....anyway thanks finally for giving me some closure

lcc_1949lcc_1949about 14 years ago
Better

I am glad you decided to bring the husband back in. I always felt that you had treated him very badly in your story. I know that she has moved on and will always have other men, black men, in her life, but at least this way her marriage comes to an end with some understanding of and love for each other. Who knows, perhaps you have a place for Bill in her future.....just not as a wimp please!

belgeradbelgeradabout 14 years ago
Drinking

So by my estimate she has admitted to having roughly 4 glasses of wine while being pregnant. I am not harping on this fact just bringing it up that most soon to be mothers avoid alcohol like the plague, I know the chances of the baby being born without a problem are there but with every drink they diminish. Im just wondering if you are going to address this later or if the baby is just an after thought for the entire story.

MabelCinnamonMabelCinnamonabout 14 years ago
I've been following

I usually don't read stories as they come out, I wait for the authors to finish. But I've been reading yours and I really like it. Sure there are a few problems, like the drinking mother and the complacent husband, but overall I like it, can't wait for more...

kathy2b46kathy2b46about 14 years ago
good turn of events

i love the way she has to has black cock but also she can still be good to her husband that she cheated on, looking for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Interesting

The story is an interesting one, but pregnant women are strongly discouraged from drinking; it can cause an illness called fetal alcohol syndrome and it's very serious.

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