All Comments on 'The Professor Ep. 02'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc22 days ago

Writing style is good but I'm struggling to feel the character's emotions. 3.4*

MigbirdMigbird23 days ago

Like how you are playing/developing this not uncommon storyline — simmering with anticipation. Nice character development though Emma fainting a bit over the top/melodramatic. Curious: How does dark fantasy romance differ from fun erotic writing? This “Professor” piece could easily go dark. By way, liked very much your “flesh” poem — thought provoking and erotic.

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New here! Aspiring dark fantasy romance author interested in exploring some fun erotic writing on the side. Might make a social media dedicated to this. Not sure yet, but starting here for now to see where it goes.