All Comments on 'The Promise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Good story. A little tame for me, but well written

girlnxtd00rgirlnxtd00rover 5 years agoAuthor

Your criticism is fair. Thank you for the compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Very erotic and well-written!Zk

girlnxtd00rgirlnxtd00rover 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you. I really appreciate it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

my dream!!!!

girlnxtd00rgirlnxtd00rover 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you... mine too... :-)

L O ReinsL O Reinsalmost 4 years ago

Oh my! Rope, blindfolds, Shibari, sharing all in a short, powerfully, sensual and smooth flowing narrative. Only one story? Well as someone who goes long spells between writing anything, I eagerly waiting till you feel the compulsion to post again. Thanks for a surprising and great story.

L O ReinsL O Reinsalmost 4 years ago

This story is even better on second read. I think it’s because it isn’t plot driven but rather a sensuous scene written with grace. Looking forward to more. L O R

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Beautifully written. That hit in all the right places! Thanks for sharing, I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Tess (uk)

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