All Comments on 'The Promise Pt. 03'

by MarcelaFay

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

pathetic.

truly pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
An interesting approach to relationship dynamics and infidelity.

It required his cheating to confront her cheating, and restore the balance of power between them. But of course it doesn't make sense. I get she lost all respect for her supplicant cuck-boy husband, but she can fuck whoever she wants, and apparently has been. So what's suddenly so special about his cock? I don't think he can reverse years of obsequious temerity for one night of macho fucking. If he takes her back with no consequences or restitution he will only confirm his wife's impression of his inadequacy and weak character. You can force some lame reconciliation, but it will look silly and contrived. I hope you do better than that.

gordo12gordo12about 7 years ago
I liked your writing.

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No indication if you plan to continue?

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