All Comments on 'The Promotion'

You really need at least one likable charecter to enjoy a story, sadly this one failed miserably. Hopefully there's a hurricane brewing and every one of these hateful arseholes will be swept out to sea.

Loved it! An epilogue would have helped wrap things up though.

When the hero of the story rapes his wife on page one, the story is in trouble. It could have been hot otherwise…

Thank you for all the feedback. In truth, I was a bit nervous so I added parts and neglected parts I probably shouldn't have in a rush to get the story uploaded. Hopefully, the next one will be better.

complete and utter bullshit, something like this should never ever be written. (i still came)