All Comments on 'The Protocol of Ahab Ch. 03'

Hard to put into words how captivated I am by this storyline and characters, so at the very least sustained applause for your creativity. After reading this chapter, I felt all but compelled to reread the first two chapters as I could not get enough of Pippa and Rachel, both so richly nuanced, and their evolving relationship. It is really mesmerizing the myriad ways you draw the reader into your story: Ordinary events, brief telling reflections, heartfelt, sometimes poignant moments, electrifying scenes of sex each uniquely/tightly tied to your storyline rather than gratuitously inserted sidebars. All also contribute to this reader’s anxiousness over where you are taking us. You clearly enjoy writing; thanks for sharing your fertile imagination.