All Comments on 'The Psychologist'

I have a problem with the opening. She is blackmailed into prostitution. That makes this non-consensual and every activity makes this rape, including this one.

Then you want us to believe she’s a trained psychologist. That’s 7 years of training, then law school and to make partner requires decades of working 6 or 7 days a week. Because if she’s not a partner, there is no way she could take off for a few hours in the afternoon.

And yet you describe her as being in her 20’s.

Love the Vicki-Sly partnership and banter not to mention how she engages with clients. Can easily picture her meeting with the psychologist who “…changed from biological male to neutral professional.” If there is a problem with this piece it’s the loose ends: What is the client’s problem, what’s with the wife, so all well now? The sex scene so perfectly Vicki — cured the client, but almost like you posted a rough draft (still loved it because love the MC) that has a lot of possibilities going forward.