by MidnightSun
I think you need to be the puppy and have to go through everything you made her do, all of it, including nudity, invasion, toys all of it.
Your first two chapters were alright (if a bit rough for my tastes), but chapter three has shown a bit more of your protagonist's colors, and I'm starting to get a bit worried for Trixie. Since she has yet to speak an entire word this entire series, it's not possible to know if she's a masochist and actually enjoys this kind of treatment or if Mike is simply an asshole, but I'm honestly leaning towards the latter. The idea behind pet play is treat your sub the same way you would treat a real pet, and if this was a real puppy then Mike's method of training her (ignoring the sexual aspects for obvious reasons) would be ineffective, cruel, and arguably outright abusive. Hitting an animal for literally no reason other than because you feel like it does NOT teach it to be submissive, it teaches it to be fearful of you.
To summarize, Mike is not a good owner. I hope he softens up and treats her a bit more kindly in the following chapters, or I don't really see myself continuing with this series.
I know who you are. Delete all your filth. Stop being a hypocrite. You have a wife, five children, and two grandchildren. God sees you.
I assume the Dom has had a puppy before since he went to an auction to get another one. I wonder what happened before. Smacking a puppy on the nose is usually the way to attract their attention especially when they have done something wrong. To draw blood just because the dom wants to hurt so badly should have the dom subjected to sanctions that forbid the dom from having a puppy. This is a fantasy but just beating your puppy is not a correct way of having a pet that will adore you and even give love unconditionally. Sorry, it does nothing for me.
This is very abusive to a PUPPY. Any amount of research in puppy play will tell you a person cannot be left in pet space for long periods of time let alone indefinitely. And to keep them healthy they need lots of time as a human too. As far as the obedience training goes most recommend a rolled up paper to the ass. There was no discussion of hard or soft limits or anything for that matter. Which. Is very wrong in a d/s relationship to begin with. Writer needs to do some back story were they e plain how they got to this understanding.