All Comments on 'The Quest for Knowledge'

Good to see you writing again! Haven't finished yet, but I saw this error so far: "One of the tombs she had skipped flashed into her mind's eye. At the time it had seemed so, wrong. Like a myth, misplaced and didn't belong. It was a demonic tomb. "

You're thinking of tome. Tomb is like a crypt or a mausoleum where where you bury dead people.

That’s one of the types of errors my phone changes without me noticing and I miss it when I edit. Hope there aren’t too many like that. I’ve been trying to pay more attention when I edit my own writing.

Hope you still like the story

Enorim seems like quite a tragic character to me. Shame. Is there any chance that he will ever revert back to how he was?

I wonder what is happening in the kingdom as a result of Neshis? After all, she left to spread corruption already.

Loving it. Already one of my favorite stories on the site. Been coming (giggity) back to it many times.

it was good until it turned snuff. 0/5

Wonderful!

I'd love to find out whether Fiona's story ever continues.

I know it looks like I just keep writing a bunch of open ended loose ends. But that's part of world building. Lots of things going on in the world. There are so many stories I want to tell but have limited time. I make a poll on my patreon for what major story I work on next. Suggestions and the poll itself is open to everyone. My CYOA's 9th encounter is the current project.