All Comments on 'The real mission of T'Pol! Ch. 02'

I will be brief. I love scfi, I love star trek and future based story's. I tried very hard to enjoy this one. But the complete lack of basic English and sentence structure destroyed any hope of that. You need a editor. Other wise I'm sure it would of been good. Don't let this diswasde you from continuing to write.

Good luck.