All Comments on 'The Real Thing Pt. 02'

your story here went in direction that I didn't expect. My favorite type of story here is father-daughter love stories. Where the father and daughter are just so overcome with emotion for each other that they willingly cross taboo lines to be together. I love those stories! And in part one, it looked like that's where this was going. But as it turned into a full-on Dom/ sub story, I went back and reread the first story, yes all seven pages, and I guess you were actually hinting that that's where it would go. You are a SPECTACULARLY good writer, and I loved the story. You draw off that teasing better than anyone I've ever seen. But personally I wasn't crazy about the Dom/sub part. I guess for me, it's a little like reading about male/male gay sex.. there's nothing wrong with it, I'm just not gay. Still, now I'm invested, and come hell or high water, I have to read the last part!

absolutely marvelous wish i was the daddy