by toyforsale
What in the fresh hell was this? I can’t believe you write this believing it to be sufficiently erotic.
Wrong category: non erotic has its own spot.
Fuck what that other person said I found the story really hot and hope to see you write more.
While it is a typical sissy story although it has no real back story so it completely lacks context. I also became bored and annoyed with the HAHA! In every other line. It sounds like someone reading from a lamely written script.