All Comments on 'The Red Shoes'

by Xris69

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ballznall60ballznall60almost 11 years ago
Good start!

This promises to evolve into a provocative and stimulating tale if you keep it going. As a bisexual, submissive male, I can relate totally to the setting and the irresistible allure of a naked woman wearing only CFMPs!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot !

Yikes !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great start!!

you are pushing all of my buttons! Waxed smooth, a dominant girl friend, horny males, a submissive mind set; add a pair of panties (for him) and lets get this party started!!

clearlakequeenclearlakequeenalmost 11 years ago
Bravo!

Really enjoying your story as my wife turned me bi. She dared me,

found the guy, set up the date with a big burly coach who forced his tongue down my throat. At first I was repulsed then suddenly went limp in his arms as the wonderful feeling of submission over took my brain and body. Suddenly I was willing to do anything for him, and for the next 3 years did.

You are expressing the feeling of submission so well and I can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot! You've definitely caught my attention!

I can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice short story

Many women have desire to see men together. It is easier to get guys to do it than most think.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This was amazing please hurry with the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
OMC. Oh my COCK !

I Am super conservative and straight, but this story Had me

Thinking.I was rock solid erect at the end. The worst was I found not wait

To read about him Being forcred to suck cock.also to take it

In the ass ! Shit what is wrong with me?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Xris69

Thank you all for your kind comments. The events here are only partly fictitious, but chapter 2 (now available) is the realm of fantasy.

C

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