by omniv
I generally don't like supernatural stories at all, but this one was just beautiful. I loved it! WOW! Very nicely done. I absolutely loved it!!!
Wow, just wow!
I wholeheartedly agree with all of the other comments, this story is amazing! It's actually really sad that the ghost girl is trapped inside the mirror, however this really is magical. I loved the whole idea of th story and really hope you add more chapters, these two lovers are perfect ro each other! Maybe eom back story on how the ghost ended up trapped would be good as well. Will she ever be able to communicate using her voice? If not, maybe a pen & paper can be reflected, so that she can communicate her story effectively.
If I could rate this more than 5 stars, I would ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Beautifully written. I hope Jacqueline takes good care of the ghost lady’s needs?!