All Comments on 'The Refuge Ch. 05'

Fabulous character and plot development, beautifully written and perfectly paced: you are a natural story teller. I hope that there are more chapters to come (so that I might too - wink).

And while one could think the path is quite clear after the previous four chapters, this part offers a few more surprises, and another rise in the developing relationship and its even hotter boiling bedtime ending.

Most enjoyable.