Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
Maybe I'll be full of more than that," she answered seductively.
"Oh, shit," was his only reply.
Many thanks to chasten and all the Adirondack Adventurers for their beta reads, editing and suggestions. Also to MsCherylTerra for her continued encouragement and help.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoSince you have been commenting on my stuff I figured I should come over here and read one of yours. I liked the build-up almost more than the relationship with the doctor. It would have been fun to read about her coming to really enjoy her topless work at the restaurant. Other than a few grammatical errors here and there, and the changing of Zach to Barry, like a previous commentor mentioned, I thought it was well-written and nicely paced. It could have even been longer for my taste.
OneAuthorover 3 years agoTop quality writing from PickFiction, as always. A perfect story for the season.
Ginloverover 3 years agoI loved the story. Two strong likeable characters. I’d love to read about their future adventures
