All Comments on 'The Resonance Ch. 23'

Another great chapter, well done.

Thoroughly enjoying this smart story. Intriguing that the Resonance might be passed along or taught. Write your story in your own time. We’ll be here.

This has been one of the most compelling stories I've read. It is well thought out and well written. However, there appears to be an increasing number of typo's, grammatical and sentence construction errors. Also, is it Elise, Elisa, Elissa... you get my point. Proof-reading would eliminate these and polish the story, for everyone's enjoyment. If you'd like my help, please just ask. No charge, my payment is the enjoyment in reading what you write. Bravo...