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Click hereTurag clutched at his throat while blood bubbled from between his fingers as he tried to draw a breath. His groin and abdomen were torn open, his entrails spilling over a phallus torn to ribbons. The large orc's eyes looked around in panic, as if he might find something to help stuff his life back into him, but he found no help. No salvation among the orcs in the stands, and certainly none from his opponent. It was the last thing Zar saw before he too collapsed into the black void.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous9 months agoThis whole series has been fantastic. The first half was pretty good but the second half has really kicked it into high gear. As others have said before the lactation, piercings and MFFF+ elements are all great. I also really like the girl on girl action and the slavery aspect of the story. You do a really good job of balancing the power and the primal domination that the orcs have over the elves alongside the clear affection and love they also have for them. Very few people can pull off that balance and even fewer can do it while also incorporating so many other sexy elements!
I really love your work and hope you continue to write it!
Anonymousabout 1 year agoHi! I Just discovered your series and I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it!
Everything you write is super sexy and well thought out. I like both the content of your sex scenes and the concepts that you are executing (lactation, piercings, MFFF+ etc).
Your story is also well written, I appreciate the attention to the emotional aspect of the characters and their interactions with one another. I especially like the relationships between female characters like Dinae and Duuhra (and Aasha and Sithkah if you count her), thats a personal favorite of fine.
I really hope you keep writing this, It's really good and I enjoy it a lot! You deserve a lot more attention.
NickiJamesabout 1 year agoAuthorThanks for reading Marasso. I haven't gone anywhere, just took me longer to write this one. Next one will be awhile as well, I have other projects that need finishing.
Marassoabout 1 year agoHey Nicki, first of all, good to see you back. I thought you left Literotica for good. That would be a pity, as your story is too good to be unfinished. Apart from hot sex scenes, I really like your world-building and the characters you created, each one felt like a real person. I like that Zar has a better insight into orcs' culture and lifestyle and wants to elevate his community further than being only violent bandits and ravagers.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Five stars from me!
