All Comments on 'The Ring'

Wonderful Idea, bit of mystique, definetly erotic, almost endless possibilities...I enjoyed your story!!

Thanks Art

Definately has possibilites. Waiting for more to see where author takes the story, though can guess where it might be going.

Waiting for the next installment to see where the story goes. It has great possibilities. Does Doris get to keep it and figure out what it can do? Does it just control people's minds or will it physically change them as well? Quit keeping us in suspense.

What a pleasure to run across this story again. I remember reading it when you first wrote it. I'd like to see another chapter.

That's how I feel after reading your story.The flow of what led up to the 'scene' was slapdash and I knew buttons would be flying any second.

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It's interesting. Write more of this story plot. Then it will be great. The start was slow but write more. I have read over 450 stories to date. So write MORE!!!