The Rise of Scally God

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Nor have I forgotten my generous buddy Neil who gave me the torn jeans and Nike hoodie. He deserves his share of hot Pakistani pussy more than Darren. I have earmarked Dr Gulzar Asfand Khan's daughter for the purpose under Project Maira. Her slit and mouth would be perfect cum receptacles for Neil the chav mechanic's cock.

After completely scally foot-defiling Maira's Muslim pussy and taking photo proof of it by slipping my mobile under the table, I have made her very submissive and open to me. She has admitted her unhappiness with her arranged marriage and is currently working on divorce from her bank manager husband.

Maira has accepted the power of chav lads to give her a simple, more fulfilling life. I put her and Neil in touch with each other. As soon as the divorce is complete, she is moving in with Neil in his grubby little flat. I and Neil have a gentleman's agreement. Maira will be his cunt but I will ass-fuck her and also impregnate her fertile cunt first in exchange for finding and gifting her to him.

For my loving and much-loved mum, Slut Sarah, I have my most ambitious plan to date - Project Gulzar Khan. Once Project Maira is complete and I have ass-fucked her, impregnated her and settled the whore with my best buddy Neil, and overseen the successful implementation of Project Foziah -- the completion of Foziah and Gulzar's divorce, I will gift Foziah to Dirty Darren. That will free up Gulzar's house to an extent except for the two sons.

I will evict both sons either by Royal Scally decree or, failing that, by getting them both on all fours side-by-side facing the front door, asses raised high and a bit of skilful barefoot-to-butt application. I'm sure they will succumb to the former rather than the latter method of eviction from my house. They are beginning to understand my power and the hold I have over their mum, dad and sister.

The stage will be set. Me and Slut Sarah, armed with her well-honed on mature Pakistani ass strap-on, will move in. I will force Gulzar into Foziah's lingerie and marry her off to her new husband, Slut Sarah. We will make a fine footstool of her, use her back as an ashtray stand and beer table while we join forces to spit-roast the loser. Me and Slut Sarah will live a life of luxury with our very own personal slave, housemaid and loyal, committed Muslim wife. We will both give and take plenty, no doubt.

As for Gulzar, my slave-branding mark is still there slap-bang centre on his forehead. I have been keeping it topped-up with regular bare toe-twists, bare heel-rubs and hard scally cock tip prods. It is a slave-mark that strangely neither his wife, Busty Bitch, his two sons, even his aged slut mother nor his wider community seem to either notice much (improbable) or at least not see as odd or unexpected.

Incredulously, the mark of slavery seems to actually enhance Gulzar's profile in his community and extended family. It has been commented on as the mark of a true worshipper. I have given up quizzing him about it. He's very coy about the whole mystery, preferring to just smile and change the subject rather than enlighten me.

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talbert29talbert298 months ago

I keep coming back to this story. It's incredible!!! Author, I wish you'd write a sequel to this where Gulzar and his two sons as well as Danny worship Karl over multiple pages. It'd be incredible!

talbert29talbert2911 months ago

This is such a great story. I wish to read more about Karl's journey. Him taking other bigger, older men under his wings and taking over their lives. Wish you had done a story on him and Danny and his gf as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Definitely a darker story than most, but for those who can temporarily/occasionally indulge in a bit of a raceplay fantasy, a scorching hot story! Karl is an unforgettable character, a scally chav who rises up in the world through sheer, inherent dominance. He's written to perfection by W_D who fleshes out the character and builds a world... those who can't tolerate raceplay can move along, but this is fantastic (and, it bears repeating, fiction).

White_DominantWhite_Dominantover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your encouraging comment, Subchink! I read your story too and liked it very much. Our stories are in the either "love it or hate it" category. There is not much middle ground since we are pushing the boundary in many ways. We project the White man as the dominant over the non-White man. This idea troubles many readers. The established theme for raceplay is BBC destroys White men and women. That is generally considered acceptable and "non racist" and to honest, neither do I consider erotic fiction, written as just that, erotic FICTION, racist when Blacks or other non-White man is projected in the dominant role. With the Rise of Scally God, I wanted to use the same them, only with roles reversed. As for Kar's gear, I wanted not to be drawn in to too much detail as I felt the story was quite long as it is. It would have been shorter and allowed more scope for the kind of detail you would like to have seen had it not been for the fact, I had to write the story in such a way that there had to plenty of background detail to Kar's life and describing his motivations or compulsions behind his conduct. Had that not been the case, I feared the story might have been rejected outright for deviating to much from the norm. My next upcoming story is based on White on White domination. I have written it in slightly different style but you will find a determined, strong young White man in it!

subchinksubchinkover 2 years ago

Wow, what a great story! I love the martial arts theme, the fact that Karl practices taekwondo, karate and kickboxing. Stories about dominant martial artists are very rare. A side kick to the head is my one of my favorites, nice that Karl starts off with that. A well-performed side kick looks so elegant and you described it perfectly, how this fighter scally raises his knee, bends his upper body sideways and kicks the sharp arch (instep actually) to the slave's forehead. And the part in which Karl's toe rests on the the slave's head, that's a front kick, I guess. So hot when he looks at himself, how he stands there balancing on his left foot like a black belt taekwondo champion, enjoying the power trip to a maximum. I also like hook kicks and spinning hook kicks, because they are so sharp, elegant and aggressive. Would love to read more. Perhaps you could also describe Karl's gear, his white (point intended) dobok or gi or his Muay Thai shorts and boxing gloves.

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