All Comments on 'The Role Players Pt. 04'

Holly gurl your delicate handling of Eric/Holly emotional problems makes this sound more like a confession than a story line. Gripping. Congratulations. Hope the Troll took head of what you said.

i loved this story, and we here more if possible, if not that is ok to(i would love to hear who was responsible for the machine malfunction) . I love the writing style and the story idea, i look forward to more.

A nice twist to the story!

So very insightful. Maybe this chapter should be titled "Becoming Holly". This is a great tale and very well told. Congratulations!

Thank You from the bottom of my heart for sharing with us a most beautiful story . I know it's not finished yet but , I have so enjoyed reading all you have written and have to admit this chapter left me with tears of joy .

Hugs & Love

Kathryn. x

Hollygurl i just want to say this story has taken a very similar course as my personal story in that what took place in this chapter kind of happened to me back last easter, except it was my subconcusus telling me to embrace my life and accept i am a submissive and like holly i know i too am broken.

thank you Nibs