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Click here"Does anyone else need a cigarette after that? I'm positively on cloud nine!" She called out to the room. Peter sucked air in between his teeth. His thoughts of pity now turning sour as he looked at her. How could she be so callous? So undisturbed by her actions? Was this a trick by Miss A.? No, she wasn't there beside him at the auction.
His mind faltered as a head-splitting migraine tore through him. The door opened once more to reveal Miss A. and Miss K. Miss A. was less composed as usual, her crown was crooked on her head and she cradled a bottle of wine in her fingers. Miss K. was silently scanning the room for anything wrong.
"Listen up!" Miss A. called loudly. "You have fifty minutes to clean yourselves up and get to bed. Miss K. will escort you all back to the third floor. There will be no appointments tomorrow per Doctor's orders, but you will all attend a mandatory meeting. " She narrowed her eyes at the girl.
"Now then Doll," Peter's headache nearly consumed him at the words. Her eyes the same shade of hazel as his.
His mind echoed one final word: No. Then for Peter Baker, there was nothing at all.
"Go ahead and say something."
"I was hoping," The girl bit her lip. "Miss A., when can I do this again?"
Miss A.'s bottle of wine fell to the ground and shattered as she collapsed where she stood in a heap. Miss K.'s eyes widened at her words. Before she could say a word, Miss A. began to cackle uncontrollably and with tears in her eyes she shook her head vigorously.
"Let's go everyone. My sister clearly has some celebrating to do." Miss K. called.
Doll's head swam with confusion for the first time in a long time. Her body was sore? It was a new feeling. Yet, she pushed past it and followed her friend out of the room leaving the other failures to wallow in their misery. All she cared about was one thing...
Happiness. Because that's who she was. A Doll who was born to make people happy. And this was her home and her family.
END OF ACT I -- FOUNDATION.
- COMMENTS
elialex086almost 3 years agoOmg, she is broken beyond salvation
The ultimate form of peace, an ego death
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis is the best story i've ever read. I'm waiting for the next part.
Very good job RoseB, you are very talented.
RoseBover 5 years agoAuthorHey! I see your comments and I just wanted to address your concerns
1) I can't ever publish the stuff I wrote on Literotica. I tried my hardest to make the scenes with Mr. Blue and The Waiting Room as let's say palatable as possible for this site. My original draft is far, far, far darker. Including Mr. Pink using Doll in the waiting room.
2) The bid amount is never truly revealed but I'll tell you. Doll's virginity was sold for $2,400,000. I don't think we'll ever get into the tens of millions for the girls. That's too much for one girl.
3) I welcome any and all feedback through emails or otherwise. You can always email me and I'll give a very prompt response to the best of my ability. I won't abandon this story because I already wrote the plot and outline and enjoy writing it. The only way this story goes unfinished is if Literotica refuses to publish certain chapters due to content.
Zentealover 5 years agoI was really confused about the last page of this chapter. But after reading your comments it has been cleared up. My only advice, you should of left the extras in with Mr. Blue, and the waiting room. I think it would of helped clarify that peter was breaking and doll was emerging from the darkness. One of the parts that got me was that Mr. Blue spent 24 million to be with doll first, and it seemed to me like it was only a 5 minute scene. Not quite what I would of been expecting if I had just shelled out 24 million. I really would like to read the deleted scenes you took out from Mr. Blue and the waiting room. If at all or ever possible. Or you could publish the scenes with Mr. Blue and the waiting room in a future chapter. More in detail, either talking to Miss K about it or as a memory/nightmare. I think this story you’re writing is absolutely captivating and if your interested I’d be more than willing to help edit or toss around ideas. Please keep this story alive and going. You have a magnificent jewel here and I’d absolutely hate to see it be one of the many unfinished books that get published on here.
