All Comments on 'The Rose Diaries v02 Ch. 01'

Are you back are you going to finished Sacred Hearts plz this is awesome

Excited to see how you will diverge from the original. Great start so far

Omg, you are back! <3 amazing writing as usual, love everything about the story!

Its nice to see you're still alive, I had as afraid you might have passed away during covid. Always nice to see you abing extra parts to your stories.

I can't believe you're back. Happy to see new content, though it's a shame you didn't finish the old stuff

are u still on discord

Yay you're back! TRD is my favorite series on this site, super excited to read TRDv02 and this is an awesome start. hope you haven't completely abandon your other stories such as Hearts Academy. Would love to see those make a comeback as well.

Thank you for the kind comments! This rewrite extends to Hearts (Already got the first chapter done for that) to recapture the original idea behind both of those stories. I felt that Hearts had become aimless and completely severed from the original idea and TRD had been sterlized rather than the horror experience I intended.

may i join your discord

Yay! new writing! You’re fantastic!! i really hope peter just submits like idk if it’s just me but that was one of my only gripes with the original. The other was the collusion between the girls like there’s a reason people only get out of trafficking rings in singular escapes. From the original I always was confused on how they let the girls coordinate escapes and such, like they constantly have eyes everywhere, wouldn’t they have audio too?? And why wouldn’t any of them snitch for goodwill of the captors? I just don’t think the human psyche is as strong as it was made out to be in the first one. I’m interested to see where you go with this from divergence! I loved the first one (even if i had to go to therapy for a bit after lmao) i’m way more submissive than these girls lmao like just stop fighting and it’s not that bad. Sure the life sucks, but is it worth dying over? Plus there’s some great benefits to just listening to them, like they do severe punishment and great rewards

I made it to half a page. This is not how a kidnap victim acts, especially when his captors have made their intentions so well known. This appears to be another feminization story where the victim just goes along with everything, thinking tough then giving up. People held against their will, male or female, are quite tough. Some even willing to harm themselves or die, rather than being forced into something they aren't. They certainly wouldn't run and yell, "help! help!," to an empty tree line. I really hope the story is more a battle of wills, instead of being a victim, who throws up his hands at every turn, giving into his captors every demand. It doesn't mean the story ends differently than the author p!an, it just gives more depth to frustrations of the battle.

Oh suburbs she's dead. He couldn't even hold his head high, not letting the cunt order him around on the first day. It would be nice for the guy to actually be strong, plot, plan and battle back in one of these stories.

"Everybody has a plan till they get punched in the mouth."

can i please join ur discord