All Comments on 'The Royal Cock Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

again i can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

First, I really love this story, it have the right amount of lewd and adorable tangled into each chapter as well as nice story development, especially as the characters and the world seem so natural even if the concept seems quite bizarre.This is all but my personally opinion however, t hits all the right spot for me to cosier this a pretty much 10/10 story (like two futas that wants to impregnate each other is such rarity to find).

So far I think I have only two nicpick with story, one is I think Mellisa should have chance to redeem herself to Jess and Kyo (maybe even join them in epilogue either as their personal buttslut or as part of harem), and second is Im worried that the future scenes with orgasm denial are going to overshadow too much of the erotic part of this story (give that both girls are not going to do lewd stuff at same time as the other pair is going to fuck like rabbits) BUT I do trust you that you will able to make both a really good story and smut out of it.

PS If I may be bit cheeky here I would love if Jess and Kyo first time was like on of the images in here https://mutualpenetration.tumblr.com but Im not sure if you are interested in writing something like this or if they even could be physically able to make this position work given both are posses very enormous cocks (+ it seems are still keep growing in size).

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