All Comments on 'The Runner's High Ch. 01'

Too early to rate. Characters still building and so is the plot direction.

Not sure where this is going....... not much provided to discern..... seems like she doesn't like herself much and doesn't really know what she wants. Not much compelling a reader to read further based on these two pages = No Hook provided - a good writer provides a hook within the first page or two. Nothing suggests she has provoking interest in anyone.

Very abrupt end to the story. Is there a page missing?

I'm interested to see how this story develops. Some people seem to want more from "Ch. 01". I'm more patient!