by stevetruestories
I truly enjoyed the length of the story and the writer's ability to write such a long story.
Having read the first two parts of this some years ago I was quite happy to see a continuation of this series however I can’t say I really enjoyed the direction this took, ****
Chapter 3 is crap! It is not merely a bad twist to the characters that had been established, it is actually foreign to who they were. Jeremy is only being used while we're supposed to think this us a gaga fantasy for him. And Donna has simply turned stupid. Burn the third chapter.