All Comments on 'The Scarlet Affair Ch. 02'

I really like your work and would give you a higher score, but your story is again a bit short and over just as the reader gets into it. The first two parts could easily be "chapter 1" and go from there. I hope you will keep up the story as you have a lot of talent.

The best story I have ever read on here...MORE MORE!

This chapter could have been left unwritten, which is basically how I found this.