All Comments on 'The Schoolhouse'

by Babblefish

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wow!!

Honestly, one of the best debuts in a long long time. More please!! And soon.

Man RayMan Rayover 19 years ago
Wow indeed!

Very good, keep `em cummin` like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great first story

loved it..maybe they could find a girl in class that needs a good spanking or maybe the older couple could discipline their house guest and teach her about anal

Great first story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Bravo!

I'm a jaded Lit. author and reader who stumbled delightedly on your writing. Obviously it's a good stroke bit, but I enjoyed the craft and characterizations. I felt "there". Will read more of you anon.

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