by Babblefish
Honestly, one of the best debuts in a long long time. More please!! And soon.
loved it..maybe they could find a girl in class that needs a good spanking or maybe the older couple could discipline their house guest and teach her about anal
Great first story
I'm a jaded Lit. author and reader who stumbled delightedly on your writing. Obviously it's a good stroke bit, but I enjoyed the craft and characterizations. I felt "there". Will read more of you anon.