All Comments on 'The Secret Birthday Gift Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This would probably fit better in the Sci-Fi & Fantasy category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Is Alex really a cuckqueen if the other woman is herself? Also, the other woman is a manufactured biosynthetic product... of sorts. Is it human? So all this setup by Alex to enable a big raunchy sex scene between David and... herself? Danielle, the other woman, is essentially Alex. So why didn't Alex save herself a boatload of cash, stay out of the closet, and get for herself what she obviously observed was the reaming of a lifetime? All this just to write overhyped sex scenes. I still say, the best stories I have read on this site had NO SEX IN THEM! - 2☆ hey it wasn't a 1☆! At least you didn't engage the characters in mindless humiliation, character assination, debasement, or other truly stupid acts of physical or mental cruelty... yet?

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineabout 1 year ago

Time for David to discover Danielle isn’t really Alex and for Alex to come out of the closet for some FMF action.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

Not LW by any definition.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

MOREEEE

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