by CAP811
Either you bumped your head, or you're smoking something really good, or most likely blessed with a fantastic imagination and the ability to put it into words. I have yet to read chapter 2 but have high hopes.
I should have been a pair of ragged claws scuttling across floors of silent seas! Love it. - Alissa
knew her - and her - and her - wellll doppelgangers away and forth to victory each and every - day - or sumpin lik dat - ah huh ah huh - maybe and possibly likely!<P>
Seriously - or not - great stuff Author<P>
Thanks with High Regard
Clever use of Eliot and Thurber for this genre. Well written and amusing.
What middle-aged middle-class married man doesn't have fantasies like these? Well done! And of course the insertion of phrases from Jabberwocky selaed the deal! I look forward to the Further Adventures Of George Prufrock!
As a Charter Member of the "Long Past It Daydreamers and Wankers Club", I welcome you to our group. I have a wonderful time with many of these same ladies in the Theatre of the Mind.
Love it. If Thurber could have gotten away with it, I'm sure that's what was REALLY going through Walter Mitty's mind.