by 123lit1234
Interesting premise.
But the sex scene was truly lacking. Started much too abruptly. Proceeded without necessary details. Ended almost before it began.
Why did she have to get on her knees and suck his cock so fast? Why didn't he ask her to show him her body first, once she'd agreed to the sex? Have her open her blouse? Have her remove her bra? Describe her tits? Have her play with her nipples? Have her at least pull up her skirt to show him her panties, and have her turn around to display her ass?
Once that was all done, have her feel how hard his cock was through his pants. And play with it a while?
Then, on to the blowjob. But in much greater detail. And, perhaps some reaching down and playing with her tits while she was sucking. Maybe a little titty fucking too.
Four stars.