All Comments on 'The Seduction of Lori Pt. 05'

This is so good……your killing me. More please!!!!

Agreed! You are such a master of the tease, Ryan! An amazing mix of romance, sex and storytelling. I just woke up and I’m wet already!! More, please!!

If you have to tell me in your bio how great you are .... you aint.

Yes, PLEASE make part 6 available as soon as possible. You certainly know how to raise the temperature.

Pretty stopped on my gravy stroke dude🤣. Really enjoying it. Reminds me of everyonesavoyeur stories who was very good also.

omg k nope its huge

Oh my!!! I sure hope Ryan turns her into a bbc slut that can’t get enough cock in her. Hopefully he or maybe her co-worker pumps a black baby into her. Please continue it’s a great series so far.

An excellent chapter! And so well written. Lori is moving along nicely! Amy x

Great job! On to Part 6

This what the death knell to a marriage sounds like.

She laid out her reasons why she shouldn’t chest and went ahead with it anyway. So her marriage means less to her than a roll in the hay with Ryan.

That’s fine but would she be so understanding if Duane fucked another woman? A younger, hotter, tighter and sexier woman?

I doubt it which means she isnt motivated by jealousy but by bored indifference.

Great job !! Building up the suspense! Hopefully in time he takes complete control of her . To many writers fail to put reality to there story . She will leave her husband and become his completely if this story is to be complete . Possibly impregnated as well.

Duane wanted this initially so it's hard to be on his side but this Ryan kid doesn't even have any game. She's just a closet skank and acts like she doesn't even have kids. She belongs to the streets

Very, very well written but I can't stand the tease! Waiting for chap 6!

Cannot wait for the next chapter. Outstanding!

As long as it remains loving and consensual, and you don't have her lose her mind in one of those mythical stories of white wives and big black cock.

I will give a final grade based upon how stupid you make her

@IC69hunter don't be a dick

Great series so far.

OMG! You have to finish this great story!

Really enjoying this series 5*s to all episodes

She’s fucked. Literally.