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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Thanks.

Oh, if only it had gone this way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Has potential!

But needs to be fleshed out better. Def more detail and a slower pace. Expand on the settlers and the Natives pic. And on the dislike.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

“Has potential” commenter seemed not to have noticed that you were limited to 750 words— sure, it might be better fleshed out, but that wasn’t an option.

Heck, you didn’t even have room to mention the smallpox the settlers introduced to First Peoples without immunity!

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