All Comments on 'The Seventh Date Pt. 04'

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GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 4 years ago

This is a nice story. Nice, good, you know, I like it. Interesting story-line, believable interactions between characters, hearing what he's feeling/thinking. Good stuff.

I feel silly pointing this out. It's about the titles of the story. This says much more about me than about you. It's about maths and dates. Unless the 7th date is somehow continued, like she doesn't go home, or the interactions never conclude. The next date is date 7 + 1 = 8, the eighth date. And so on. Silly stuff. Please keep writing.

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