All Comments on 'The Sex Quiz Ch. 01'

you need an editor

Your story was very hard to read due to the many grammar and spelling mistakes.

Really enjoyed the Story; so Far! Needs To Be Completed! She Has Squirted, But: Neither One Is Anywhere Near Finished! (Neither Am I (

The concept is hot, but it's hard to read with so many errors

Had me up to the last line! I was hoping Brittany would give instructions for a BJ and go on for another page as they take turns demonstrating and talking while he's screaming from being edged by the pauses be tween them.

Distracted by the errors, get an editor!