All Comments on 'The Sextraterrestrial Ch. 00'

Good start but you left off at a weird place. Maybe you can work on that. No one likes part of a beginning of a story

I will always be a fan of men and women together in bondage, particularly when abducted by aliens for sex experiments - so I'll definitely keep reading as this seems to tick that box nicely! If I had a critique, it would be to slow the pacing down very slightly for the sex scenes. ie: describe the act of them being stripped naked in juicy detail to build tension, show us the characters' reactions as the machine begins to do its lewd work on them - maybe even have the machine engage in "foreplay" before going all in. It's just somewhat difficult as a reader to have the time to get worked up and aroused while reading if the characters also don't have that chance and simply "dive into the deep end" as it were. You do a great job of taking your time setting up the scene and the characters, so having some more time enjoy the erotic payoff would go a long way.

That said, I think this has tons of promise and you have an enjoyable, easy to ready writing style. Keep it coming! :D