by GlassO
This was ok I guess, but kinda no fun unless she has Alexander give her some cock, and have her daughter eat her pussy. 4/5. It had potential, but fizzled.
Jedd
wow, this was just plain dumb. wasted a few minutes I will never get back. Come on really, this is what you decided to write?
I dont know what the other commentor are smoking. Impeccable writing, and a reasonable extension of the premise. Theres a lot of wonderfully erotic room to grow the premise.
Good luck with future writing, and dont let people with overly high expectations discourage you.
It was a really good story, I don't know what these other comments are having a problem with