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by the all nighter

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
i can see them having to call the fire dept

i can see them having to call the fire dept, because she passes out in the vent, and ropes to get them out come loose, leaving her sitting on his face on a ledge in the vent until the FD can get there to rescue them....

Don GrampaDon Grampaabout 19 years ago
GREAT !!!

Very good story with a very original plot line. I liked it a lot and hope that THE ALL NIGHTER will submit more. Thanks for a good read that was fun.

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